Analysis of Desire



She shyly asked me to play along,
though the idea, to me felt wrong.
Her secret wish and tender plea,
A shrouded side I couldn't foresee.

Hands and feet were bound to the bed,
Face down, my glutes wide spread.
Biting the pillow, a tear on my cheek,
She laughed with every headboard creak.

In passion's realm she was tough,
The strap-on's touch a bit too rough.
She had fun, though I hoped not twice,
For my comfort, we'll find a gentler spice.

As I lay in stillness, my insides sore,
Her toy dropped laying on the floor.
I felt dirty, but I saw her happy glow,
Perhaps, in the future, I might not say no.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110111101 100101111 01010101 010111001 10101101 111111 1001001111 11110011 011111 01110111 11111111 1110110101 1110101011 01110101 11101110101 01001011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 607
Words 134
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on August 06, 2023

Submitted by muzz on March 20, 2024

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