Analysis of Sunsetz

lei 2008 (manila)



Every time I look up to the sky;
I always feel so high,
whenever the sunsets arrives;
I feel so alive.

I was watching, waiting for you
to come and see this sunset's view.
I've been witnessing this for a while;
I'd like to experience this alongside you, with a smile.

Do you know? you remind me of the sunset,
even though, sometimes you make me upset.
Your warmth is comforting; always captivating,
whenever my gaze aligns with you, it is worth staying


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1001111101 11111 0100101 11101 11101011 1101111 111001101 111010010111101 1111011101 1010111101 1111001100 01011011111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 454
Words 95
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

so I make this poem for someone who's special to me, and this someone reminds me of the sunse. Even though I need to wait for hours just to see the sunset, it doesn't matter to me since after all the times I'll wait, It is worth staring and waiting since I got a chance ro witness the captivating moment with the sunset's view.

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Written on February 24, 2024

Submitted by acabaashley316 on February 24, 2024

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