Analysis of Almost Close
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
There comes at times,
When almost close is enough for most...
To keep motivated to touch and taste,
The craving not to give up hope.
Or sleep to get.
Wishing for more of it.
Sometimes.
Especially,
When the last time one forgets.
To set the alarm clock to remember...
What day it is.
And being late for work all the time,
Is never recommended to say to the boss...
'It is never too late!'
Hoping this excuse to make,
Heard again and again.
Doesn't get one fired and replaced.
As supervisor of Human Resources!
'You are almost 'this' close,
From being divorced to find another job!
Do you know that?
Do you hear what I'm saying to you?
Why are you here?
Why am I here?
Why are we here?
To get what accomplished?
And...
For what reason or purpose?
'Threats!
That's what my 'ex" said.
As if that 'job' I expected once in a while,
Kept me satisfied!'
Scheme | AXBXXXAXCXDXXXXXBD XXXXEEEXXX CXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 11110111 111001101 01011111 1111 101111 01 010 1011101 1100111010 1111 010111101 11001011101 111011 1010111 101001 10111001 1100110100 11111 11001110101 1111 111111011 1111 1111 1111 111010 0 1110110 1 11111 111110101001 1110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 873 |
Words | 200 |
Sentences | 28 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 18, 10, 4 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 211 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 53 |
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Written on March 08, 2024
Submitted by lpahtillah on March 08, 2024
Modified by lpahtillah on March 08, 2024
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