Analysis of Swelled Laughter.



If there were eyes in place of nose,
And nose in place of eyes,
Both are twins to look cool,

If the forehead is in place of the mouth,
The mouth had been in place of the forehead,
The stomach would have been swelled with laughter,

How much fun it would have been,
If there were hands in place of legs,
And legs in place of hands,
What difference would it make?
Both have five fingers,

There would have been stomach in place of chest,
And chest in place of stomach,
The stomach would fill Air first and then chest,

If this has happened the whole system would have gone haywire,
Tension would have mounted over tension,
Had to run away with hands instead of feet,

If the drum had to be tied on the stomach
Then even the support would have been helpless,
Therefore, it is better to be everything systematically,
This is what will happen if you are out of system................


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 879
Words 187
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

If our body parts are not in a proper place and are at other place like nose in place of eyes, legs in place of hands etc. How much fun would it make.

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Written on March 06, 2024

Submitted by brijmohan_p on March 07, 2024

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BrijMohan Poply

After my school I joined Indian Air Force and served for twenty years took release and served for nineteen years in Airports Authority of India and retired on 2006, settled in Harahua, Varanasi till date, I am writing poetry and songs since my childhood in Hindi and started writing in English by 2007 onwards also translated my many Hindi song and poems into English. Poems and songs writing is my passion. Thanks. more…

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