Analysis of Hell or Heaven



I had a nightmare I married the wrong one
The world turned to hell for the evil we had done
He cursed me so I cursed him
Our children learned so much hate
I had a dream of finding the right man
We were real
Far from perfect
He respected me so I respected him
Never allowing each others lights to dim
Our children learned there can be a happy home


Scheme AABCDEFBBG
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1101110011 011111010111 1111111 10101111 1101110011 101 1101 10101110101 10010110111 101011110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 346
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 276
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted by amandak on March 05, 2024

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