Analysis of She waits for with me.



She waits with me.

My captures  locked me in a room, tied and blindfolded, for one year. It was dark and silent; there was no one there. So I dreamed about a girl with golden hair that would blow in the warm summer breeze and her eyes sparkle like the stars in the sky, and we would go for a walk by a stream of glass, and on the other side, a field of golden daffodils swayed. I can taste her soft, sweet lips. They came and unlocked the door. Then I heard a loud blast, and my girlfriend came back. But it was not a dream; we went back down to the glass stream. 


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11011001101011111101011111111010111011110011010011010100101111011011101010101110101111011111001011110110111111110111111011
Characters 566
Words 118
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 216
Words per line (avg) 58
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 58

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Sometimes the dreams are better than the real thing.

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Written on March 05, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 05, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 07, 2024

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