Analysis of What is wrong with some people
Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)
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What is wrong with some people
On the horizon a layer of cloud dust tends to form from all the broken hearts across the lands. In a desire to trust but the clarity never equals your decision. When many days were blended into one as two watched the sunset and their Ora grew and its shadow reflected one heart as two minds gave their love. Forever felt right and the movement was of a joyful energy to the future. One day why was it gone. The emotional output was like a empty gas tank just before the race. When nation talks can make progress why can't two individuals see the life sanctuary they together produce. Scientists can discover a black hole in space but two people can't give of themselves to create a togetherness filled with love. People need to reevaluate themselves because they keep themselves from being happy.
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Metre | 1 1111110 100100101111111101010101000101110100101010101101010011111010110101101011111111010110010110101001010111111001001110101110101110111111101001011001010011001010011011110111011010010011110110100101110111010 |
Characters | 843 |
Words | 151 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 3 |
Letters per line (avg) | 227 |
Words per line (avg) | 51 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 340 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 76 |
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