Analysis of What is wrong with some people

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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What is wrong with some people

On the horizon a layer of cloud dust tends to form from all the broken hearts across the lands. In a desire to trust but the clarity never equals your decision.  When many days were blended into one as two watched the sunset and their Ora grew and its shadow reflected one heart as two minds gave their love. Forever felt right and the movement was of a joyful energy to the future. One day why was it gone. The emotional output was like a empty gas tank just before the race. When nation talks can make progress why can't two individuals see the life sanctuary they together produce.  Scientists can discover a black hole in space but two people can't give of themselves to create a togetherness filled with love. People need to reevaluate themselves because they keep themselves from being happy.


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Characters 843
Words 151
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 227
Words per line (avg) 51
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Written on February 16, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 16, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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