Analysis of Withdrawn



She was sitting in the den
writing her heart out loud
on the lid of a garbage can
while her introvert twin
that banned her that day
felt homophobic upstairs
in their shared bedroom
with a dear school friend
because of that one’s
sudden tender advances

She kept writing from then on
expressing familiar un-ease
and forsaken chances


Scheme XXXXXXXXXA XXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110001 100111 10110101 10101 11011 101001 0111 10111 01111 1010010 1110111 01001011 001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 335
Words 61
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by ludy_b on February 10, 2024

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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