Analysis of Neutral Existence

Carla Y Brown 1975 (United States of America)



This neutral state of existence
Never feeling anything
I want to feel alive
Live in the moments beyond the temporary gratification of our intimacy
You walk out you walk in
I can never exclude you or betray you
I'm bonded to you for eternity
You are my light my dark my everything
I am afraid to sleep for fear of never seeing you again


Scheme ABCDEFDBG
Poetic Form Nonet (44%)
Metre 11011010 101010 111101 1001001010000101101000 111110 11100111011 1101110100 111111110 1101111111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 335
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 271
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by carlaybrown45 on January 15, 2024

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