Analysis of Captured among the obscurity

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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Captured among the obscurity

On the tip of the magical wand we made with love we can shoot a star to the Heavens. With each sparkle we build up visions that can walk us to a victory in life. As we use our ancestors calling to make sense of the unseen an invisible force of mind and measure reveals to us a path of which to take. Only at the end of the day with the brightness of the sun will we know the rhyme or reason of our efforts. So each day we must at the beginning collect and gather ourselves for history of our people has proven that we have the ability to go out into the world and conquer all tasks we are faced with. We give something we get something. At the end of our day we can come back to our four walls and unwind as we recenter our core and pay homage to our people and praise our creator for In-between the amens and the thank yous lys the truth that we surround and protect our heart and soul with.


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Characters 936
Words 189
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 247
Words per line (avg) 62
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Written on January 30, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on January 30, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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