Analysis of Extension of Life
Extension of Life
Arman Hoque
With praise and scorn,
And a battle well worn,
Humanity passed the threshold to creating life in AI.
We thought it was shocking, yet we’ve done it before;
We’ve wiped out whole species; created and influenced so many more.
We’ve changed the lay of the land;
In a way flora and fauna don’t understand.
Either that or we remain at a risk much too high.
Too close to disaster to let our consequence pass by.
What is our global foot print?
What does our impact mean?
Humanity has been on earth for a wink,
Close humanity’s eyes the world wouldn’t blink ;
Yet our legacy imparts were no passing stint;
We’ve created impacts remaining to be seen.
We’ve wiped out species and created others to feed us.
We’ve created AI with precaution so they need us.
AI isn’t one organism,
But a network - a hive.
Built on tiny pieces, collectively they thrive.
Built for a purpose, many species have purpose fulfilled;
And on a consequently risky quest science has since instilled.
We’ve created intelligence - is that the definition of life?
Have we played as god on the edge of a knife?
What rights do our creations have for sure?
What plights and miseries must our creations in time endure?
Without the limitation of time, our legacy lasts beyond rhythm and rhyme.
AI is humanity’s enduring footprint.
If the world were pure, for sure we are a tint.
And We’re just starting to unlock AI’s blueprint.
Scheme | AB CCDEE FFDD GHBBGH IIXJJ KKAA LL XGGG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011 101 1101 001011 01001011010101 111110111101 11111001001001101 1101101 00110010101 1011101101111 111010111010011 11101011 1110011 01001111101 1110111 1101000101101 101001010111 11110001010111 1010110101111 111100 10101 111010010011 11010101011001 0101000101101101 1010010011001011 11111101101 11110010111 1101001100100101 01001011101001011001 1110101 10101111101 0011010111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,448 |
Words | 288 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 5, 4, 6, 5, 4, 2, 4 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 139 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 32 |
About this poem
Inspired by AI and my chats with ChatGPT as an intelligence…
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