Analysis of God's Magical Smile.



O' God, your magic,
Wow, your magic,
The smile is green
On your lips.........
What a magical smile,

To someone you give
The wealth of laughter,
To someone you give
The wealth of happiness,
To someone you give
The wealth of pen.
To someone you give
The wealth of love,

Your magic is wonder..........

Give to someone
Take from someone,
Give after tearing the roof,
If the intention is not clear
Then you use your stick,

Your magic is bullying.................


Scheme aaxxx BcBxBxBx c ddxxa x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (35%)
Metre 11110 1110 0111 111 101001 1111 01110 1111 011100 1111 0111 1111 0111 110110 111 111 1101001 10010111 11111 1101100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 461
Words 96
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 1, 5, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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God is great, magical and wonder with his green smile on his lips, when he likes to give a lot, tears the roof and gives.

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Written on June 08, 1997

Submitted by brijmohan_p on January 19, 2024

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For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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