Analysis of Done And Yet Undone



Done and yet not done.
Done and yet to be undone.
Done and yet not done.
Done and yet to be undone.
Hoping one day you will see me,
As the one for you to be.

And not one you hear it told,
From others I'm a jigolo.
Those the both of us don't know.
Spreading rumors then to go.

Done to do and yet undone,
To prove to you I am the one.
Who will stay honest and true.
And tell you everything I do.

Yes I've made mistakes before.
To learn from them and not ignore.
Perhaps that's why others warn you,
Someone else is better you can give your love!

Done and yet to be undone.
I know I'm the only one for you.
No doubt about it.
You have captured my heart.
There's no doubt about it.
Only you possess that 'IT' I can not quit.
No doubt it.
And you've got to notice,
Me for and you for me make a perfect fit.
As if,
We were meant by God to be together.

You've got my nose wide opened.
And it won't be closed soon.
You've got my nose wide opened.
Leaving little air to breathe.

I'm yet not done.
Until I hear you say,
Come get it.
No I'm not yet,
Until I hear you say I've got it.
And come and get from you to give!


Scheme AAAAbb xxcc aadd eedx Adfxfffxfxx GxGx axfxfx
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 1011101 10111 1011101 10111111 1011111 0111111 110101 1011111 1010111 1110101 11111101 1111001 0111011 1110101 11110101 01111011 1111011111 1011101 111010111 11011 111011 111011 10101111111 111 011110 11011110011 11 1011111010 1111110 011111 1111110 1010111 1111 011111 111 1111 011111111 01011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,113
Words 277
Sentences 31
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 11, 4, 6
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on January 17, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on January 17, 2024

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