Analysis of The Drupe



This idyllic trail through the woods
along the river has been scene
to many a thoughtful hour, befitting
the reveries of Rousseau;

my secrets, my desires, my scorn–
    these woods know them all–a silent
    partner to my pontification.

The river flows slowly – as leisurely as
my walk – neither I nor the water has anywhere to be, but the river always listening, carries my worry to the sea;

in late fall before first frost, but after
     the rains begin, no one else haunts
     these woods but me.

Slogging down the trail the sucking
sound of mud at my heels, the wet
underbrush grown back – salal slaps
my legs as I pass;

It is quiet and still but for the sound
       of raindrops, the squirrels and deer
       are absent, the regular repartee of
       birds fall silent.

The trail widens where the walnut
trees grow and undergrowth disappears,
I pick up a drupe and absentmindedly
fondle the husk while I meander,
picking it as I amble in the gentle
rain;

my thoughts escape my mind
        to stain my fingers a brownish yellow
        that will not wash out for a week,
        reminding me where I have been.


Scheme XXAB XCX XD EXD AXXX XXXC XXFEFX XBXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101101 01010111 11001010010 0100101 110101011 11111010 10110010 01011011001 111011010110111010110010110101 0110111110 01011111 1111 10101010 11111101 101111 11111 1110011101 1101001 1100100011 1110 0110101 1101001 1110101 100111010 10111100010 1 110111 1111001010 11111101 01011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,171
Words 222
Sentences 4
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 4, 4, 6, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Years ago I lived down a country dirt road in an old farmhouse. Below our home was a river with about three miles of meandering trails frequented by dog walkers, and the like. My favorite time of year to walk there was in late fall when the weather was not really friendly and I knew I'd likely find myself alone. This poem came from one of those solitary walks. This poem represents alternating external then internal dialog. (The formatting is not quite loading correctly though, sorry)

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Submitted by GCTHOMAS on January 10, 2024

Modified by GCTHOMAS on January 10, 2024

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