Analysis of Hope Someday
I was the oldest son, and i was proud of it,
I had four younger siblings, and I'm happy to fend for them.
My family is well known for its woodwork business, because we lived in a cold place,
It was a tiresome work, but i was happy.
I went to go get some wood,
When I got a call that my parents where in the hospital,
I rushed over.
They were in bad shape, and i cried a lot,
Don't cry, said my dad..
Brave boys don't cry.
Dad is right my dear,
Be strong for your siblings,
And make us proud.
"We love you" they both said,
And with a smile on their faces,
They breathe their last breath.
Its been four years since their passing,
Life hasn't been easy on us,
But we still try to be better.
Soon my family business sky rocketed,
And we became the best wood seller,
It was amazing.
While rejoicing, i remembered my parents,
Then i said, "we did it, we made you proud"
I love you Mom and Dad.
Scheme | XX XX XXA XBX XXC XXX DXA XAD XCB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110101011111 111101001101111 11001111111001110011 110100111110 1111111 11101111010010 1110 1001101101 11111 1111 11111 111110 0111 111111 01011110 11111 11111110 11011011 11111110 11100101100 010101110 11010 10101010110 1111111111 111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 896 |
Words | 210 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 74 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
About this poem
This poem talks about the cruelty of life at times and how we should never give up
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Written on December 27, 2023
Submitted by sobechukwuloretae on December 27, 2023
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