Analysis of To Those Lonely Tonight



To Those Lonely Tonight

On Christmas Eve,
What are you doing?
Watching alone the blinding lights?
Bothered by nostalgic Christmas songs,
Triggered by memories of wholeness,
Carefree madness, when you were a child?

Broken, are you?
Drowning in a deluge of unforgiving doubts?
Being asked questions by a throng
Who listens and understands not?

How do you deal with it?
Where does a soul find company in the dark?

Oh, Christ waits at the end of this hopeless road.
He gives peace, offers rest,
Calls you awhile to halt.
Let your heart, in Him, find solace:
To really live, indulge in His grace.

Joy does not always come loud and clear,
Trumpeted by a host of angels in mid-air:

Joy is a seed Christ plants
In parched hearts,
Watered by seemingly weak faith,
Fertilized by God's assuring love.

Hold on, Pilgrim,
Dare not give up.
This night will pass like a whim,
This darkness will not last.
Sadness runs away swiftly and then...
Gladness, dancing with tambourine
On a mountaintop.
She will welcome you again, a familiar friend,
Or a lover,
And invite you to lay your head
On her lap.


Scheme X XXXXXX XXXX XX XXXXX XX XXXX XXXXXXXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111001 1101 11110 10010101 101010101 101100110 11011001 1011 100010100101 10110101 1100011 111111 11011100001 11110111101 111101 110111 11101110 110101011 11111101 100101110011 110111 011 10110011 10110101 1110 1111 1111101 110111 101011001 110101 1010 111010100101 1010 00111111 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,089
Words 227
Sentences 17
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 4, 2, 5, 2, 4, 11
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Written on Christmas Eve as a poem of hope for those who are going through depression.

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Written on December 24, 2023

Submitted by cefncrsouth on December 24, 2023

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