Analysis of If I see you I win…



They just want you to see the light,
See the insights.
If a crowd pleases,
Without wheezing?
I want to be happy.
Get intimate with the creator.
See your rights.
Do not seek more than you can chew,
See what you can do.
In a sequel,
Want to be treated equal.
The sounds of the towns,
The twilight ,
I see the love above,
Flying like a dove.


Scheme ABCDEFBGGHHIAJJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (47%)
Metre 11111101 101 10110 0110 111110 110010010 111 11111111 11111 0010 1111010 01101 01 110101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 338
Words 81
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 256
Words per stanza (avg) 68

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A saying a seeing…

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by Ameena.beyah50 on December 21, 2023

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