Analysis of Breaking



When I look at you,
My body gets so hot, like a pot of el dente pasta.
Man I thought I lost ya.
My love for you is
Unconditional, so
Original, not always so traditional.
That’s in our own
Way that’s official.
A penny for your thoughts?
I’m so distraught.
Your complete,
Beautiful self always
Swimming in my thoughts.
Man love is so precious, I thought I lost.  My life’s mission,
Never let that happen
At all costs.
This is my one and only shot.
I will make the best decisions, deciding with precision.
With only loving
Conditions. I am so
Glad your giving it
One more shot your opening of your heart.
You know we are one
We feel each other,
Almost reading each other’s thoughts.
God, I didn’t realize it would be this hard, the matters of our hearts.
It’s time to open our hearts and fight for each other along the way, even if we have to smell each others
Farts.
Get the deck of cards ,
Lay down your hand , as well do I and we show each others hearts.


Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJKHLLMNLOEPQLRHSTDUS
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 11111 11011110111110 111111 11111 01001 01001110100 10101 11010 010111 1101 101 10011 10011 11111011111110 101110 111 11110101 11101010101010 11010 010111 11101 1111100111 11111 11110 1101101 11110111110101101 1111010101111001011011111110 1 10111 111111110111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 985
Words 209
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 731
Words per stanza (avg) 186

About this poem

Heartbreak, a traumatic break up.

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Written on November 24, 2023

Submitted by fckccck86 on December 18, 2023

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Faith Coty

My name is Faith Coty. I am 37 years old and I live in St. Petersburg Florida. I’ve been here most of my life. I was actually born in Southbridge Massachusetts, and I came down here when I was about nine years old. I am just a free spirit poem writer. This is my first time ever putting a poem of mine out here. I love to write, especially poems. They really are a release of any kind of issue that is going on with me. Just any kind of feeling really. It’s a good way to put my stuff on the table, it makes me feel better after. I write Lyrical poems, mostly. more…

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