Analysis of Innocent Suffer



In the shadows where innocence resides,
Children caught in a web where evil hides.
Parents and adults, their choices unkind,
Weaving a tapestry of suffering, entwined.

In lands where hatred's flames ignite,
Children tremble in the cold of night.
Their tiny hearts, burdened by despair,
In the wake of adults who choose not to care.

Through streets that echo with cries unheard,
They bear the weight of sins conferred.
For parents, blind to the consequences dire,
Expose their kin to a vengeful fire.

Karma, a silent force, begins to weave,
Justice sought for those who deceive.
A reckoning, a cosmic toll,
For the innocent hearts that paid the toll.

Children, pawns in a game unjust,
Their futures tarnished by mistrust.
Yet, as the universe unfolds its plan,
Karma rises to confront each errant man.

The perpetrators, who thought they were wise,
Now face the truth in remorseful guise.
Their deeds, like shadows, no longer hide,
Exposed to the light, the justice applied.

Children, once shrouded in the dark,
Find solace in Karma's embark.
For the sins of the elders, the innocent paid,
But in the end, justice is finally laid.

A cosmic balance, an unyielding decree,
Karma extracts what is meant to be.
In the echoes of suffering, a lesson is taught,
That evil's harvest is eventually caught.
.....Martin Francom
https://www.facebook.com/groups/336964065558348


Scheme AABB CCDD EEXX FFGG HHII JJKK LLMM NNXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 001110001 1010011101 1000111001 100100110001 0111101 101000111 110110101 00110111111 111101101 11011101 1101101001 0111101010 1001010111 10111101 01000101 1010011101 10100101 11010101 110100111 10101011101 010011101 110100101 11111101 0110101001 10110001 1100101 101101001001 10011011001 01010101001 10111111 0010110001011 11101010001 1010 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,386
Words 266
Sentences 20
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Written on November 30, 2023

Submitted by MartyFrancom on December 10, 2023

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Martin Francom

Retired Pharmacist, Now a Gentleman farmer. more…

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