Analysis of InTeyes



Like ice coming from water
The clouds cut through sky.
With no sound of rain.
Image of a hand holding sand
Opening and dissolving
Into air.

Just feelings expressed.
Grasping at nothing .
Sounds of flowers growing
Imagined.

Watched but can’t be heard.
Pictures painted on glass
Dissolving .

We walked through the park
Holding hands .
Hoping to hear the sound of flowers growing
Blooming .

Love growing
No sound of rain.
No grasping at air.
Just feelings expressed.

Lovers see love in each others eyes .

As if through glass, always clean
Felt but can’t be seen
As a picture painted on glass that is
Always clean .

Lovers see love in each others eyes .


Scheme xxaxbc Dbbx xxb xxbb bacD E ffxf E
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110 01111 11111 10101101 1000010 011 11001 10110 111010 010 11111 101011 010 11101 101 10110111010 10 110 1111 11011 11001 101101101 111111 11111 1010101111 11 101101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 661
Words 134
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 3, 4, 4, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Submitted by River136 on November 27, 2023

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