Analysis of What lys beyond your fields of imagination

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



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What lys beyond your fields of imagination

The cedar trees smell remind me of a cabin dream I had as a young lad. The corn fields so high U could be invisible for days. At that point you might as well lay down and take a nap. Soon while you slumber the woods will get wind of you an innocent dreaming the Forrest life to live animation.  The butterfly talks to you and ask how your day is. The hummingbirds sing your favorite song to you. The rabbits perform a dance on a mound of dirt as their stage. The old catapillar smokes a pipe wondering why everyone has to be so loud. The clouds in the sky play with figurines like an itch-A-Sketch and make you laugh. Just when you thought it couldn't get any better the ducks and geese put on acrobatics that put an experienced pilot to shame. Suddenly there's a gun shot in the air and everyone scatters. You wake and it's just Farmer Sam's old beater Ford back firing again. You look for proof of what you thought was real and all you find is rabbit fur on the dirt mound and that was enough for you. You walk away smiling and happy.


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Characters 1,094
Words 211
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 288
Words per line (avg) 70
Letters per stanza (avg) 432
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Written on December 03, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 03, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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