Analysis of Trodden

Adjekawen A. Jeremiah 1998 (Delta State, Nigeria)



Lonely mind weighs heavier than clouds of bad weather
Like the world on the shoulders of Atlas
Crushing one down the path to one’s palace
I’ve been bearing this weight for so long.

Trodden down by weight as cold as ice
No friend feel the pain behind these eyes
No one notice the weight
Only smiling face.

Clouds weigh heavier by the day
It may soon start to rain.


Scheme XAAX XXXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1011100111110 1011010110 1011011110 111011111 101111111 111010111 111001 10101 11100101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 371
Words 75
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Adjekawen A. Jeremiah

Adjekawen Jeremiah Agberia hails from Ughelli south of Delta State, Nigeria. He is currently studying law at the Niger Delta University, Wilberforce Island, Bayelsa State, Nigeria. The young poet of Uhrobo origin, who started writing poetry at the age of fifteen, is the firstborn son, amongs three brothers, of a single mother. Works of poetry penned by A.A. Jeremiah (his pen name), are mostly centered around love, romance, politics and betrayal; and, a few, on melancholy and nature. more…

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