Analysis of They’re Now On The Walk If Fame (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



They’re Now On The Walk Of Fame   (Bussokusekika)

A tale of two stars
There once were two close brothers
Who had lofty dreams
They were raised on a small ranch
There were thirteen in their clan
They’re now on the Walk of Fame

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   11/23/2023


Scheme X XXXAXX A
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 01111 1101110 11101 1011011 1011011 1110111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 273
Words 50
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

For some silly reason this one makes me want to try my luck at playing Golf in the Sierra with Romeo…The two can play Golf if they do desire…The last known address in the Sierra was in a former well known woman’s club in CA…The two now reside with their aunt Juanna…Authenticatation may be warranted in this instance…SG received and I authenticate RG…FM TOT G at your discretion…The two are in the white whales contacts living with their aunt Juanna…I guess that sometimes dreams really do come true…They have made new friends at the old women’s club…A certain person even placed monies on their new friends from distant shores…The monies were even returned for some silly reason…How fortunate…Oh…And for some reason this one makes me want to sip Kentucky whisky and read a good book on a Kindle…So much for said matter of discussion…

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Written on November 23, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on November 23, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on November 23, 2023

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