Analysis of Keep It Loved



Keep it loved,
Your life.
Regardless of your circumstances.
Or kept duped beliefs.
You have come to realize were false.
And purposely deceived.
You were not born,
To be taught that to teach.
It has always been you to discover reality.
As is to be...
To explore the difference made.
Between truth and the fiction to delude,
Reality.

Keep it loved.
Your life.
Since personal discoveries,
Are often bitter and seldom sweet.
And the knowing of this,
Will have you feeling upset.
Left stressed into a deep depression.
Leaving you weak, confused.
Mentally.

Know the mess that is to seem self defeating.
Or not yours alone to condone by yourself.
Know the mess that is to seem there to stay.
Will be that way.
If you do not wake up.
Observe and witness without delay.
To understand.
And make it clearly understood to no one,
But you.
That the mess that has been made,
You may had not known the depth of it.
Nor did you originate it to create.

Keep it loved.
Your life.
And never regret stepping away.
To know your happiness to deserve,
Belongs to you.
Without guilt or regret to feel.

Keep it loved.
Your life.
Not to look back at mistakes made.
But move on to know,
Feeling to be a fool may be difficult to admit.
However...
Getting over it,
Takes forgiving yourself for being one!

Keep your life loved.
To know life to live it,
Has its ups and downs.
But to turn your frown into smile,
Is up to you.
And no one else to teach how that is done!

Your life is to be loved.
To remain that way to stay if you wish.
And want it bad enough to move on!
You can.
You will.
You must.
Trust yourself more!

You can.
You will.
Knowing this to do for yourself is a must!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 11 01011100 11101 11111001 010001 1011 111111 11111101010 1111 10101001 0110010101 10 111 11 11000100 110100101 001011 1111001 110101010 101101 100 10111111010 11101101101 1011111111 1111 111111 010100101 101 0111001111 11 1011111 111110111 1110101101 111 11 010011001 111100101 0111 01110111 111 11 11111011 11111 10110111100101 10 10101 1010011101 1111 111111 11101 11111011 1111 0111111111 111111 1011111111 011101111 11 11 11 1011 11 11 10111101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,657
Words 383
Sentences 52
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 13, 9, 12, 6, 8, 6, 7, 3
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Written on November 09, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 09, 2023

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