Analysis of My child listen to me



listen my child, my beloved, holder of my gene that I hold,
same blood flows in your vein, so in inferiority  a lot it to me pain.

a lot of freebees & advices piled up  for your success it is untold,
in this world of cut throat competition , you must greatly gain.

listen to all ,reply none speak as required make moment meaningful.
blame and demoralized words always flies like dust in the air,

feel all the air mixture, inhale only oxygen which is fact fully not fool.
what you listen, filter all and among them save  good ones, goes wide and far

your each childhood habit will become principle of good leader,
live a disciplined life with bearing punctuality ,disciplined days dear,

be a leader of own mind and thought within show love and care
man of child, beacon for path lost pilgrims, worship of work perpetual & pure.

stand tall at difficulties ,never panic nor share the bare truth may future scar.
find reasons for revival, surely return of normalcy ,no sorrow is obscure

share your good days ,success stories limitedly where it is rarely require
for the upliftment of downgraded people, show soft heart for those endure.

as a student study is top most duty, also see all around  honesty or dishonesty
never take lightly the light books you carry, contains heavier than hills amnesty

this time of life you are appointed to write, read and learn and plough field of education
latter days, a lot of traffic to rush minds road, pedesters walks in your footpath option.

this life is for only one time never come again and after
enjoy the sunshine ,green tees, buzzing of bees ,lions roar.

walk and let others walk ,push not others, for hope of upstairs
honestly walk slower for time longer then you will  be winner.

winning should be goal with own improvement and involvement
winner and loser are same actor in a play  only changes the garment.


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Characters 1,941
Words 358
Sentences 12
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 57
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Submitted by PRADEEP81.BEHERA on October 26, 2023

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