Analysis of Loving the person I just met



We can that loving someone is a part of our life, we all experience being attached with that person, And loving them is the best thing you can ever give.

But sometimes we need to control our selves, because not all the time, you can feel happiness with them, this words coming out of my mouth was actually for you.

I've been wanting to say all of those words to you, but sad to say that I don't have the courage to tell you my unsaid feelings,
Its too risky and I don't want to ruined our friendship even though it keeps hurting me.

My imagination with you was like a fairy tale, you are the prince and I'm the princess, who's been liking you secretly.
I want to hide my feelings to you,but I just can't control it.

My heart beats twice as fast when I laid my eyes on you, The way you walk, the way you talk, made my heart so blue, and the way you smiled at me, it gives me butterflies.

You captured my heart with your foxy eyes and the beautiful smile of yours,
The you that making me fluttered every time your eyes crossed in mine.

And it feels like there an electric that connects the both of us, because every time, we crosses path erasing you in my memories are nearly impossible.

Your presence was like a drug to me, I wanted to be near you my love, and never be apart, just like the moon and the stars in the sky, they never wanted to be apart with each other.

And my heart is filled with admiration to the man I just met.


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Characters 1,439
Words 302
Sentences 11
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 93
Words per line (avg) 24
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

It's about deeply in love with the person I just met

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Written on September 26, 2023

Submitted by Noraisaebrahim973 on October 12, 2023

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