Analysis of First Edition



In the world of faded echoes, I stand battered and broken, as worthless as a relic of an antiquated casino token! The cosmos, in its infinite design, bestows its blessings on chosen few. Yet, my friend, it bypasses both me and you.

Two souls entwined by life's cruel game, we can forge a bond from our shared misfortune's flame. You could be my Bonnie, and I, your steadfast Clyde. In this narrative, you the groom, I the bitter bride. Take my hand, let's traverse these streets with grace, make the common folk envious of our embrace. Let's weave our hopes and dreams so tight, my river only flows upstream in the moon's soft light.

In the kitchen, we'll cook as if it's forever, our love so genuine, it can't be severed. We'll delve into each other's deepest fears, collecting scars like treasured souvenirs. Together, we'll set the world ablaze, sit in quiet awe, watching it all turn to haze. We'll keep the ashes of the old world in a metaphorical urn, as a reminder of the lessons we've learned.

For your laughter, I'd scale mountains so high, for your smile, I'd paint the endless sky. Your face, each flaw I'll celebrate, for you've thawed the frozen chambers of my heart's state. Our story, my love, is an original tome, not a copy, nor found on a forgotten floppy. This love, so rare, almost extinct, a first edition, with ancient ink distinctly inked.

Hold me close, but grant me space to breathe, for when fear arises, I may tend to leave. Let my soul roam free, once held captive in my youth, the shadows of the past, a haunting, unfading truth. The chilling thoughts concealed in my head, some I dare not unveil, the darkest days I've seen, I struggle to conceal. It's the tear-soaked shoulder that earns its glory, in this story, yet unfinished, unwritten, and gory.


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Sentences 20
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 275
Words per line (avg) 63
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 63

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The poem continued to unfold, revealing a love that celebrated imperfections, that cherished every facet of the beloved. "For your laughter, I'd scale mountains so high, for your smile, I'd paint the endless sky. Your face, each flaw I'll celebrate, for you've thawed the frozen chambers of my heart's state." But it also acknowledged the scars of the past, the haunting memories that lingered in the depths of the soul. "Hold me close, but grant me space to breathe, for when fear arises, I may tend to leave. Let my soul roam free, once held captive in my youth, the shadows of the past, a haunting, unfading truth." The poem concluded with a sense of both vulnerability and strength, a recognition that love was not a fairy tale but a journey filled with uncertainties. "It's the tear-soaked shoulder that earns its glory, in this story, yet unfinished, unwritten, and gory." And so, the poem stood as a testament to the complexity of 

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Written on October 09, 2023

Submitted by vanna8806091 on October 09, 2023

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Savannah Bollenbaugh

About Me I'm a Southern Illinois native, with a deep-seated passion for writing, discovered in my tranquil hometown. This passion, as essential as breathing, began at twelve and has evolved over the years across various mediums. My daughters, life's greatest gifts, enrich my writing with depth and emotional connectivity. Not only words, but nature inspires me, grounding my creativity and providing introspection opportunities. This respect for nature imbues my writings with a unique touch. My writings are a blend of raw emotions, motherhood insights, small-town charm, and nature's essence. Join me in this journey of words and emotions! more…

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