Analysis of PATIENT LOVE



                                                        
                                            For Dawn Chiger & Anna Spagna

Desiring emotions are fearless to me,
I long for love to cling to my mind,
So, I can heart passions is blind,

But many lonely sorrows I have fathomed in my love,
Beating in my passionate heart,
Love, that was of,
Harmonious realism and ecstasy turned apart.

Desire is mourning of passion and pain,
It’s real emotions with not a gain,
It’s for me passionately woeing insane,
It’s always my bleeding heart again.

My passion is waiting,
I must be patient to let free my woe,
It takes time for my passion to be taken,
To let my desire flow.

I’m full with passionate love I don’t fear,
A balance, harmonize my reality and fantasy,
But always my love ended with a fantasy tear,
And a torned heart with a sorrowed destiny.

I always search, beckoning love to flow my way,
For my fantasied love can be craved,
A search that seems not to end until my dying day,
Beckoning my affection in my heart to be graved.

Still desire seems to cling to my mind,
And still that loneliness of passion is always there,
I know love takes its time,
But I feel want near.

Without love, I feel all alone,
I feel it in the very narrow of my bone,
For me and passion is a timely, tearful loneliness,
Because all my passion is sorrowness.

To desire is my destiny,
Many of my searching loves will be still more heartaches of mind,
Passion and want are suppressed in me,
But patiently my desiring love I will find.

Theodore Arthur Pinnock
July 1,1980


Scheme X ABB CDCD EEEX XFXF GAHA IXIB BHXG JJKK ABAB XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 010001011011 111111111 11111011 1101010111011 10011001 1111 01001000100101 01011011001 110101101 1111000101 11110101 110110 1111011111 11111101110 1110101 1111001111 010101100100 111110101001 0011101100 11110011111 1111111 0111111011101 1001010011111 1010111111 011100110111 111111 11111 01111101 111001010111 11010101010100 01111011 101011100 10111011111111 100110101 1100101001111 101010 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,570
Words 317
Sentences 9
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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