Analysis of Not going to effect anyone



I thought I'd face my fear
So my mind went like a fool
To my death bed life
Dug a hole and layed
Fluffy eiderdown inside
Forests surrounding my natural life

Why are not cry for ducks
Too sweet like orange

Would you cry for an orange?
Would hou cry for a person?
Would you cry for a  that killed you?
Why don't we hear souls and angels cry?

They've seen traumas beyond measure
Another duck entered the yolk?
Yoke enter the duvk?

Creators the baby in your innocence love?
Not all grow up


Scheme XXABBA XC CXXX XDD XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111101 11111 10101 10101 1001011001 111111 11110 1111110 1111010 11110111 111110101 11100110 01011001 11001 010010011001 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 495
Words 105
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 2, 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on November 01, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 31, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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