Analysis of Peer



The concentration in his dawn
When he looked in awe and yet forlorn
He took out a pen and began to draw
He birthed the faces of those he saw
And like a hand of glory they began their tour
They grew into roles that asked for more
And taught like life was worth fighting for

They rested well for each day was unsure
The terrain exciting. Their own glory awaiting. Pure. Godly.
Their being streamed in light yet hidden in the shadows they watched over their nights.

Whence he came she felt delight to see a devine silvery blue shining light.
And he her grateful oversight.
So they ruled the heavens and what was to be right. And birthed them threefold children of the light to shower fresh love and extraordinary light.

Shon peace through hearts as archangels bent foes, lifting curses and piercing light moulds into the dark; warriors of light.
Who's with me they prayed in legion with angelic force and piercing might.

Humble knowings lead to devine intercourse as life grew anew, and miracles brought new light afterlife.
Raised the reeped with lightening brightness as the christ, ascended masters and leaders of light weeped with gladness.

Human eyes reflecting their greatest needs, wiping clean disrespect of animalistic greed.
And the skies opened up uplift in them my sons and daughters, the new and the old, the sacred, profound and the slaughtered, be healed it offered in mind, body and soul, in energy, in life, in leadership and in life goal.

Then she took notice. This poet. All who know it. So it was. As above so below.
The kiss was heard like an arrow, crisp and cleared.


Scheme XXAABCC BXD EEE EE XD XX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 0010011 111010101 1110100111 110101111 010111010111 110111111 011111101 1101111101 0010101110010110 110101110001111011 1111101110011001101 0101010 11101001111101111010111011001001 111111011101001011010110011 1111101011010101 10111011011101010011110 1011100101010101001011111 101010110110101111 00110110011101001001010010010111100110010100010100011 111101101111111101101 01111110101
Characters 1,603
Words 299
Sentences 22
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on October 25, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 25, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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