Analysis of Take on your shoulders



Take on your shoulders
The wings of angels
Be your own hero of your great life
Love is around you
And it's rapturus sunshine
Stretches our arms for heaven to hold
Glide in my limelight
Be one together
Rise your blessings to the stars
Sing with joy hmmnnn
Sing for pleasure

Take on your shoulders
The wings of angels
From each corner of this wide world
I will love you in my mind
Heal this sweet heart like Sam bailey
As it beats to yours as tenderly as mine.
Each one of us
, each one of us loves somebody
Their special gift
That is shared so find this devine
Brush your hands now with purple and violets like holding the dress of a motherly eye

Take on your shoulders the times of sweet angels
Let your bodys fly over this green earth


Scheme ABxxcxxdxcd ABxxecxexcx bx
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 01110 111101111 11011 0111 1010111011 1011 11010 1110101 1111 1110 11110 01110 11101111 1111011 11111110 11111110011 1111 1111110 1101 11111101 1111110010011001101001 11110011110 111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 740
Words 147
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 11, 11, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 197
Words per stanza (avg) 48

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Writing from the heart

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Written on October 25, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 25, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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