Analysis of The Child Within



THE CHILD IN ME CRIES OUT~

with such pain and confusion

I spank her~ send her to bed

LEAVE ME ALONE~

THE CHILD IN ME CRIES OUT~

asking for comfort and consoling

Stop~  I have no time for you

LEAVE ME ALONE~

THE CHILD IN ME CRIES OUT~

with complete anguish

Go Away~ I am fixing my Life

LEAVE   ME   ALONE~

THE.  CHILD.  IN.  ME.  CRIES.  OUT~

I   LISTEN………

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Scheme A b x C A x x C A x x c a b xx
Poetic Form
Metre 010111 1110010 1101011 1101 010111 101100010 1111111 1101 010111 10110 101111011 1101 010111 110 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 559
Words 93
Sentences 6
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 17
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

I wrote this many years ago, when I was integrating oneself to wholeness. I am writing this from memory that I shall never forget.

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Written on August 14, 1993

Submitted by Caliconine on October 21, 2023

Modified by Caliconine on October 21, 2023

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