Analysis of Impress your heart on mine.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Impress your heart on mine
A seal from the devine
Pleas of light shine untill
Time stands still upon your will
Measure me in destiny
I see through all that you seek in me
Mild and meak voice upon an angel speak
With every strengthened heart that beats
Silible tones within the wind
Free the hurt from those who think they've sinned
Trembling voice that tries to sing
Carefree laughter you could bring
Echo your sublimity
Through each simple extacy
My hope here lives in serenity
But bring home to you one day
Take me with your kindest spear
Open the gates to heaven here
Blessings pour through me as I leave
To evolve the life that you achieved


Scheme AABBCCDEFGHHFECIJKLM
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 011111 011001 11111 1110111 1010100 111111101 1011011101 110010111 110101 101111111 10011111 110111 1011 11101 111100100 1111111 1111101 10011101 10111111 101011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 645
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 525
Words per stanza (avg) 119
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Written on October 15, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 15, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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