Analysis of I Want To Be The Oldest



If I can live to be the oldest man
Personally it means that I've won
Until someone else lives longer than I can
I won't die while I'm the oldest one


Scheme ABAB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111110101 100011111 0111110111 111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 148
Words 31
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

Time runs out as we get Old.

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Written on October 13, 2023

Submitted on October 13, 2023

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