Analysis of Why all these lies



I love you and I will never let you go
You are the one I fell in love with, really slow

You are my heart, my breath, my passion, my peace
I will love you forever and take you to Greece

You are the only one in my life, Oo my love you will mine very soon
Listening to him makes me feel over the moon

One day I listened to someone, I love you with all my heart
The voice sounds so familiar that's all I thought.

I looked at the boy who was saying this all
To a girl who is pretty and tall

I found myself laughing at me, dear dove
Is he the one you are madly in love

I am so naive, I give him all I have
And what he did, put me alive in the grave

I wanted to scream and scream so loud
But I don't want to seem weak in this crowd

I gather myself and leave him there
I never looked back and wished to never found him anywhere

In deep dark times when I am alone
I just want to forget and forgive him and show that I have grown

But there is ach in my soul.
And this is the thing I have no control.

Why do you do this, why are all these lies
Every time I think of it, my heart cries.


Scheme AA BB CC XX DD EE XX FF GG HH II JJ
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11101110111 110111011101 11111111011 111101001111 110101011111111101 100111111001 11110111111111 01110101111 11101111011 101111001 111101111 1101111001 1111111111 01111101001 110110111 1111111011 11010111 11011011101110 011111101 1111010011011111 1111011 0110111101 1111111111 10011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,093
Words 257
Sentences 4
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Heart break|lies|deceit

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Written on October 10, 2023

Submitted by bushramumtazz on October 10, 2023

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