Analysis of Pretty stars on the wall

Angel Zimu 2007 (Gauteng)



Environment peaceful,
It's like the bubbles of cuteness,
Elevates my inner soul with happiness,
My breath sways away like the breeze
That brushes my skin.

On my left
I feel the sand elongates the vibrations
In my body through and through,
I feel the warm breeze in my nostrils
Smelling tree-like.

I look around a see trees swaying,
Communicating in a peaceful language,
I look above I see a wall filled with stars,
One brighter, one dimmer,
All forming fascinating shapes and patterns.

In a peaceful palace,
A graceful bubble that makes my heart jump,
Where the beautiful surroundings bring tears'
It's where I belong.


Scheme XAAXX XXXXX XXXXX AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010010 11010110 1011011100 11101101 11011 111 110110010 0110101 110110110 1011 110101110 0100001010 11011101111 110110 1101001010 001010 0101011111 1010001011 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 622
Words 122
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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I am painting the picture I had in my mind in the beach at night.

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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by johannazimu on September 10, 2023

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