Analysis of Inseparable Shadow of thoughts



I wish I feared things that I hated, things I could run away from but unfortunately it was my own thoughts that made me tremble and lose the rhythm of my breath.

My thoughts constantly remind me-that how my best is not even good enough, they remind how my achievements are merely the result of serendipity and warn me that once I am out of my limited luck, I will be exposed as the incompetent person I am.

Fortunately these thoughts occasionally retreat from my head and I am substituted with my daily worries, but these thoughts always find their way back to their permanent home.

So I wait until the day their home is destroyed and then I will be finally be free, free from myself.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111101111011101000111111111001010111 1110001111111110101101110101100011010001111111111001111011001001011 100011010000111101110011101011111111111001 1110101111010111110011111
Characters 688
Words 133
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 137
Words per line (avg) 32
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

The poem is a deeply introspective and emotional piece that explores the inner turmoil and self-doubt of the speaker. It delves into the psychological struggles of the individual, portraying a sense of insecurity and anxiety about their own abilities and achievements.

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Written on September 18, 2023

Submitted by yazdahir on September 18, 2023

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