Analysis of Thunderhead

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



i feel a steady breeze

Falling rain
 Like kisses fly

Streams of
manna from the skies

As sudden darkness

Racing walls
of clouds

Signal
a gathering storm

across empty
space and time

Dropping intermittent
flash bombs

Which suddenly arrive

Exploding in refrain
With thunderous replies

Shattering silence
With just enough distraction

To conceal
The teardrops

Forming
In my eyes  

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Scheme A BX CD X XX XX XX XX X BD XX XA XD C
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 101 1101 11 10101 11010 101 11 10 01001 0110 101 10010 11 110001 010001 110001 10010 1101010 101 01 10 011 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 482
Words 111
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on 2020

Submitted by Charles2 on September 22, 2023

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