Analysis of Proud And Quick To Articulate It



So proud they are.
Bold and unaware yet protective.
Of the one they follow behind blindly.
One who has declared an ability,
Although unproven...
And left suspected to question,
To be a genius and alone capable,
Of having skills to heal, mend and fix...
All things broken.
Quicker than a bat of an eye.
And faster than superman fictioned to do it.
Stop! In mid-flight. And seek out culprits,
With precision x-ray vision.

Leaving many following along,
Blindly and convinced...
They have not been used,
To be made into fools.

Yet...
Participating they will And choose to continue,
in the belief to accept...
Any cesspool known to collect waste,
As an actual place where all rainbows end.
In which there they will find,
Not only a pot of gold.
But also,
Their names engraved on separate pots.
With this achieved to see and it proven,
Doubters of such power are the ones...
Of true idiotic stupid beliefs.
Especially to dispute what has been told,
By a leader whose honesty is as pure...
As pure,
Well...
As pure as one is bold enough,
To tell lies sold.

And this,
Fools...
Who are made to stay that way,
Accept and believe themselves to be...
More intelligent than any other human being.

And...
Have themselves become quick to defend,
And articulate...
Just what it is their chosen leader,
Expects for them to do.
To comprehend and understand.
Without a word heard or hear spoken.
Yet will move approvingly,
As devoted and programmed...
To understand robots.

Regardless if no rainbows are around.
Sun up or Sun down.
And every cesspool they visit,
Smells as if a dumping ground for B.S.
Remain they will stay loyal.
No matter if their leader to obey and follow,
Suggested to recommend...
Pudding to discover delicious,
Must first be tested by the taste of it!


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10011010 1011100110 1110110100 1010 01010110 11010001100 110111101 1110 10101111 01011001111 101101110 10101110 101010001 10001 11111 111011 1 010011011010 0001101 10111011 1110011111 011111 1100111 110 11011101 1101110110 101110101 110101001 0101011111 10101100111 11 1 11111101 1111 01 1 1111111 010010111 10100110101010 0 101011101 0010 111111010 011111 101001 010111110 1110100 101001 1011 010111101 11111 01001110 111010111 0111110 1101110101010 010101 101010010 1111010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,760
Words 370
Sentences 40
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 13, 4, 18, 5, 10, 9
Lines Amount 59
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Written on September 18, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 18, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on September 19, 2023

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