Analysis of Nickel a Pound”



Just a freckled face tag-along.
Too young to be pulling them bolls.
Mama pulls them bolls singing a song.
With baby brother riding on her sack in toll.

Hear me Jesus in heaven above why must I toil for a nickel a pound,
Stoop and pull them bolls for little pay we can’t stop ‘til the cotton trailers filled.

Cotton bolls up three feet high.
Sis and I are working hard to fill our sacks.
This is the last rows mama says.
Little brother eating a sweet potato.

Hear me Jesus in heaven above why must I toil for a nickel a pound,
Stoop and pull them bolls for little pay we can’t stop ‘til the cotton trailers full.

It’s been a long day for little pay.
Evening fades watching the sun go down.
To the house for a bath before we hit the hay
A bowl of red beans to fill this hollow sound.

Hear me Jesus in heaven above why must I toil for a nickel a pound,
Stoop and pull them bolls for little pay we can’t stop ‘til the cotton trailers full.

Snug in bed with little brother.
Sister’s listens to the radio
I hear Daddy’s telling mother.
It looks like this month we’ll be okay.

New shoes for the kids and a rug for you
A bicycle for Jim and wagon for Dee
For sis a record player and a record or two
We’re blessed to have kids like these.

Daddy turned out the light and went to bed.
Mama comes and gives us each a kiss.
“Goodnight,” she says, “I love you.”

Hear me Jesus, now I know why I toil for a nickel a pound.


Scheme axax Bx xxxc BD exeb BD fcfe gxgx xxg b
Poetic Form
Metre 10101101 11111011 101111001 110101010101 1110010011111101001 1011111011111010101 1011111 101110111101 11011101 1010100101 1110010011111101001 1011111011111010101 110111101 101100111 101101011101 01111111101 1110010011111101001 1011111011111010101 10111010 10101010 1111010 11111111 1110100111 01001101011 1100110000111 0111111 1011010111 101011101 111111 1110111111101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,450
Words 316
Sentences 22
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

A true story 'poem' my family picking cotton in the late 1940s in Texas

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Written on January 12, 1993

Submitted by Bovina_Jim on August 08, 2023

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Jim Bob Swafford

Jim Bob Swafford studied art at Lubbock Christian University and Abilene Christian University and graduated with a BA degree with a major in art. After a successful career in business and extensive travel, Swafford became aware of the individual art styles of each area of the country and how they were influenced by climate, quality of light, attitudes, and lifestyles. He has absorbed into his style elements of what he sees as unique to the south and west of the country. Over time, Swafford’s style has moved towards stronger use of color and an emphasis on the essence of his subject matter. The artist paints southwest, landscapes, western lifestyle, cowboy life, seascapes, wildlife, and flowers. The art of poetry is another love of Jim Bob’s creative spirit. more…

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