Analysis of A wounded heart



Everyday  that passes you feel far. The aches grow, my energy is weakened and my days are dark. The leaves age with the seasons and so do I terribly. There’s no sunlight to carry me through my days. The sunlight followed you as you walked away. The forecast that followed was severe thunderstorms with damage to everything in sight. My heart grieves you like a death. Events, traveling and activities to alter my mind and try to forget you. It refuses to exit.
- [x] Good morning sorrow , Good morning heartache I long for blue skies. You left wounds in my major organ. A ache that never leaves and a wound no one can heal. Indulging in life’s pleasures to feel good, but my mind always leads back to you. Daydreaming of rubbing your upper thigh and comforting you while you listen to me. Remembering happiness.
The forecast will forever be hazardous until the sun decides to show its peak. The sun is needed very much in this climate. Very missed and very loved.
Unpredictable sun.


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Characters 989
Words 179
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 195
Words per line (avg) 45
Letters per stanza (avg) 779
Words per stanza (avg) 178

About this poem

It touches on the topic of lost love. The poet is grieving a past relationship with a love that walked away from their relationship. The poet now feels depressed and misses this love and is very unhappy. Since this love left the poet feels like their life is falling apart and they have no purpose. The poet now desperately hopes and wishes this love returns someday and brings back the happiness that they once felt when they were a union. The poet described this love as the sun.  

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Written on August 24, 2023

Submitted by Selah.Crawford13 on August 24, 2023

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A wounded heart.

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