Analysis of To Edith Jacobson (1912-2003)

Michael Drewes 1944 (Herzhausen)



And she, who taught us wisdom, is now gone,
The strings are ripped, the harp, it sounds no more,
And she went to a far and unknown shore.
Extinguished is her light that for us shone.

All that she in her fruitful life has done
Lives on in many thoughts for ever more.
Remembrance carries on with all her lore,
And she is with us even though she’s gone.

Our lives, they seem to be a fleeting tale,
And for the harvest ready is the sheaf
And everything that in a lifetime grew.

We are but smoke before a mighty gale,
So driven are we like a wilted leaf,
And useless play is what we wish and do.


Scheme ABBX XBBA CDE CDE
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110111 0111011111 0111010011 0101011111 1110010111 1101011101 0101011101 0111110111 10111110101 0101010101 01010011 1111010101 1101110101 0101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 599
Words 132
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

My reaction to the passing of Edith Jacobson whose literary circle my wife and I attended.

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Written on January 02, 2004

Submitted by michaeld.67199 on September 05, 2023

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Michael Drewes

Michael Drewes devotes his time not only to composing music but also to poetry in German, Spanish, English and Hebrew. more…

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