Analysis of Somerleyton



A weeping willow sheltered in the gales of November;
Alone in a field, she braces her trunk for each impact;
Shifting with the growing tensions of the relentless winds;
Fervidly eager to keep her furrowed, pliant bark intact.

Her branches bend and creak, stretch and sway;
Ever moving with the unpredictable breeze;
Ever changing with the wisps of air from lands far away.
She waits. She listens. She prays.

A whimsical song from the beak of an Eastern whip-poor-will;
Alerting their flock to the oncoming hurricane;
Studded with a thousand whips, she yields to no living soul;
Holding steadfast against tide and grain.

In the face of the tempest’s might, she stands tall and proud;
A symbol of resilience, she endures and shines like a beacon in the night;
Her melodies carried on the winds, a haunting refrain;
A message to all who hear, to hold on through the torrential rain.

She is the voice of the storm, a harbinger of change;
With every flicker of light, a reminder of hope and strength to sustain;
In the quiet of the night, her song echoes across deserted plains;
A reminder that even in the midst of chaos, beauty can behold strength.


Scheme XAXA BXBX XCXC XXCC XCXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 0101100011010 01001110011101 10101010100101 1101101010101 010101101 10101001001 10101011111101 1111011 010011011110111 01011101010 10101011111101 10101101 001101111101 01010100101011010001 01001010101001 0101111111100101 1101101010011 1100101100101101101 00101010110010101 0010110001110101011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,151
Words 223
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

It has been one year without my beloved dog, Allie May. She passed away on December 30, 2021 of renal failure in her left kidney due to TCC bladder cancer. It's hard to believe how much time has already without her... and the fear of the future days, months, years, and decades without her is unfathomable. In many ways, she was my canine child and companion. I raised her since she was a puppy. I nurtured her, gave her love, spent time with her, went on adventures with her, experienced new foods and places with her. .. and while she isn't able to speak human languages, she was able to communicate with her actions and rambunctious bark. Is it so hard to believe that a human can have children that are not born to them, and are not the same species? Are we so incapable of loving or caring for non-humans? To me, Allie was more than just a "pet". She was my daughter... and I was her mother. At this time in my life, I have no human children, but someday, I may. On the day she passed away, I wished for the universe to grant her life once more in the form of my first human daughter. Someday, if the stars align, my wish may be granted. 

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Written on December 30, 2022

Submitted by ammiemarie on August 16, 2023

Modified by ammiemarie on August 16, 2023

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Ammie-Marie Littke

Ammie-Marie Littke is an American writer, songwriter, multimedia designer, and data analyst. Born and raised in southwest Michigan, she learned to love music and literature from the age of 4, adapting the ability to recognize a popular song within the first few seconds of airplay on the radio. She spent much of her teenage youth exploring her creative skills, writing nearly 200 poems and song lyrics between the ages of 11 and 17. She earned a Bachelor's Degree in Web Design & Interactive Media from the Art Institute of Pittsburgh and an Associate's Degree in Graphic Design Management from Bradford School in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. She graduated from East High School in Youngstown, Ohio. more…

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