Analysis of My Time with You
Nicolas Simpson 1983 (Illinois)
Making my way to you,
Stopping everywhere and spending money,
Buying and trading things on my way to you,
Hoping that I surprise you when I see you,
Surprises and gifts in my arms and hands,
Getting some food for the night,
Hoping that no one changes my mind,
Enjoying the walk at night together,
Music playing softly and ready to dance,
Enjoying the dance and ready to cook,
Heading to the apartment you slip and fall,
I caught you and deeper we fell in love,
Checking your injuries hoping there is none,
You sprain your ankle, your in pain as you cry,
I console you as the paramedics checks you out,
Hoping that your injuries isn't bad,
They say its a sprain but we ride together,
As the hospital exams you,
I wait patiently to see you,
Finally they let me see you,
Calmly I asked 'Will you be okay?",
As they wrap your foot up,
I call a cab for us to head home,
I say to you "I love you with all my heart,
They said "that you broke your ankle" '',
They calmly have it set,
I help you to the cab,
Off we go home,
I popped the question " will you marry me?",
Your eyes are filled with joy,
And you said "Yes ",
Our love will be stronger together than ever,
Hoping that we're together forever,
I gazed in your beautiful eyes,
And I say to you
Your hair is golden as the golden gate bridge
Your eyes as glistening as the the reflection of the calm water
Your heart is pure as pure honey
Your grace is so precious as a calm horse prancing
Your as fierce as a tiger catching their prey
Your as calm and pure hearted
I love you always forever and ever"
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,552 |
Words | 341 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 42 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,194 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 305 |
About this poem
Its about loving your love ones and what your going through while your both together even through death do us apart.
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