Analysis of Decay



You squeeze a sponge and leave it in the sun -
Under a cloudless sky no rain will fall;
It dries and dessicate you watch it die
And crumble piece by piece into the dust.

We also although legion are as one
Who dedicate our lives to this old hall.
And now left desolate we wonder why
We feel so little joy, so little trust.

Untimely letters sent the day before
We go our way do nothing to dispel
The sorrow that we feel, but rather more
They drive us to the cliff, the brink of hell.

And so betrayed where once we were employed
Now decimate we plunge into the void.


Scheme ABCD ABCD EFEF GG
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011001 1001011111 11011111 0101110101 110110111 1101011111 0111001101 1111011101 0101010101 11101110101 0101111101 1111010111 0101111001 110110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 566
Words 120
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

I wrote this poem as a number of long-term colleagues were moving on from my place of work. I was pondering what the future might be. It wasn't a happy feeling.

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Submitted by winge.bass on July 28, 2023

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Bill Inge

I am a teacher of the Classics, born in the Midlands and now, married and with three grown-up children, living in north Wales. I enjoy problem solving and learning new things. more…

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