Analysis of Do Unto Me As You Will (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Do Unto Me As You Will   Bussokusekika)

Mighty Jehovah
IF I’m the first fruit of man
Who has overcome
And IF its pleasing to you
I offer my body up
Do unto me as you will

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 10010 1101111 1110 0111011 1101101 1101111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 205
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This one came to mind after reading Zephaniah 1…I wonder IF My Father will accept my body as a burnt offering???And his hand is stretched out still…There is still time to return my signet seal and repent and turn from your ways…

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Written on July 19, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on July 19, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on July 19, 2023

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