Analysis of Newborn Boy Tossed Out Car Window
we knew capitalism had turned ugly
after the first lemonade stand drive by
children denounced their parents
when their eyes were opened
to supply side economics
and demand side criminal enterprise
plunging on in a premeditated stupor
they floated between the tables
a jackpot here a jackhammer there
a cartesian Bingo bonanza elsewhere
going on but the scantiest of gossip
it's a fill in the blank world
where a suitcase full of dead mockingbirds
found on the late bus idling at the terminal
against the smell of urine nightmares
constituted a reunion of the ever faithful
filling the night with interrogation
we had some exceptional men in our unit
dropped into trouble spots too hot to touch
setting up sensors and detectors and bait
scholars statesmen jurists bishops
and a bent maggoty reeking poet
a sleight of hand magnum opus abuser
surrounded by the burning bodies
of everyone he ever knew
yet all is not a ham bone up the ass
I had just cleaned up my syntax and grammar
with maple syrup and golden dairy butter
so I'll put off proofing this mess for another day
too old to dig up reliable proof anyhow
my brain's already in a specimen jar
it lived a mythical fairy tale life
worth a transfer to the end of the line
to the ancient carnival of phantoms
so I sent in my manicurist security guard
from the tropical hammock islands
their scissors going snip snip snip
rattling the bones of the dead
if this is just a make believe universe
I'd hate to see the real one
but I'm pretty sure space is continuous
and spewing rhyme out of the hearts of stars
but what the hell do I know
it all sounds so fresh and dewy
assuring me that people of greater densities
the beautific the anointed the the sanctified
fuck up real stupid just like we do
forgive me but my thoughts have all been stolen
the end point is eluding me as a point
as an area we'll eventually get there
From "Engine of Didactic Beauty" available on Amazon
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110001110 1001101111 1001110 111010 1011010 001110010 10100010010 11001010 0110101 0010100101 101101110 1010011 1011111 1101110010100 01011101 1000010101010 100110010 1110100101010 1011011111 10110001001 10101010 00111010 01111010010 010101010 1101101 1111011101 1111111010 110100101010 1111101110101 111110100110 11010001001 1101001011 1001101101 1010100110 1110110001001 101001010 11010111 1001101 1111010110 1111011 11101110100 0101110111 1101111 11111010 0101110110100 010010001 111101111 01111111110 01110101101 1110010100011 1101010100100110 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,926 |
Words | 354 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 50, 1 |
Lines Amount | 51 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 783 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 175 |
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