Analysis of My Forever Wish



**My Forever Wish**

I see your face in my mind
...in my dreams I hear your words and feel you near
...every where I am my gaze searches for you

I feel your touch unexpectedly
...I wonder how you are and what you are doing
...are you thinking about me too

Words left unspoken leaves a longing to speak with you once again
...fantasies left unfulfilled
...desires yet to discover

To lay within your arms
...to feel your tender touch and passionate kisses
...to fulfill your desires without reservation

Life's journey has led me to you
...One that I offer to you
...Give to me all that you are and I will reciprocate with that and more

Not each other's first love
...but wanting to be your last
...a promise of an unending eternal love

To you I offer my heart
...my love in all its splendour
...mind, body and soul
You are My Forever Wish.
         


Scheme A XBC XXC XXX XXX CCX DXD XBXA
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1111011 01111110111 100111111011 11110100 110111011110 11100111 1101010101111101 100101 01011010 110111 111101010010 101101001010 11011111 1111011 11111110110101101 111011 1101111 010110100101 1111011 110111 11001 1110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 853
Words 164
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

It was written in sadness when the man that I thought would be in my life til the end. Suddenly, he walked away. Ooh Rah Marine!

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Written on June 13, 2023

Submitted by Celtic.rose on June 16, 2023

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