Analysis of 4 Days Later



The Autumn breeze was blowing
On that cool November night
She came to see her babies
And tuck them in real tight

She told them that she loved them
And she’d see them all real soon
Who knew that 4 days later
Chaos would be strewn

The phone rang with a question
And the answer was already clear
Why would he even call
He knew she wasn’t here

A mother’s thoughts were racing
Her children missed their mom
How could she break the news
Without it exploding like a bomb?

It doesn’t matter where she’s been
What she’s done or who she knew
What matters is she’s a person
With a right to live, just like you

If you know where she could be
The only thing left to do is call
No one needs to know your name
And you don’t have to be involved

Please bring her family peace
And let her children sleep at night
Let a mother start to heal
And be forgiven for doing what’s right

Her purpose on this earth
Isn’t in vain, it’s for something greater
And I pray you never have to answer a call
That comes in 4 days later

Bring Tab Home…


Scheme ABXB XCDC EXFX AGXG XHEH XFXX XBXB XDFD X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101110 1110101 1111010 011011 1111111 0111111 111110 10111 0111010 001010101 111101 11111 0101010 010111 111101 011010101 1110111 1111111 11011010 10111111 1111111 010111111 1111111 01111101 1101001 01010111 1010111 0101011001 010111 101111010 011110111001 110110 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,074
Words 239
Sentences 2
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This poem was written about a young mother who is missing from my hometown. There are speculations about her boyfriend possibly killing her but no formal charges have been filed. Everyone is talking, but the words aren’t loud enough. It’s as if she simply vanished…

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Written on April 21, 2023

Submitted by Ashvs4285 on June 27, 2023

1:11 min read
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Ashley Smith Williams

I am a 37 year old SAHM and I enjoy cooking, reading and writing. more…

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