Analysis of To my child

Tosher 1994 (Brahmanbaria)



"To my child"

A mother is likely by born a mother,
but a father is not of that kind everywhere. Whether he's mad or a professional mind, this could be a rationale --
why the last Prophet (puh) uttered 3 time',
the mother's name ;
prior, heading towards the father's one.
Above of these kinds has already booked for the legend. So, I asked my child to name of a legend, the day before ascertained, till then I, Father remained.

Again, I put my soul to the solemn-eye
No late, eradicated, all at once found I;
the Father in me raised, chased by
the gene, had already died!
So, I asked my child to name of a legend, the day before ascertained, till then I, Father remained. Till then I, Father remained.  

tosher.  *(puh) : peace be upon him.


Scheme X XXXXXA BBBXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 01011011010 1010111111010111001001111001 101101101 0101 1010010101 01111101011010111111110100101011111001 01111110101 11010011111 01001111 0110101 1111111101001010111110011111001 1111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 747
Words 149
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 5, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

Is about a father who want to pass the paternal barrier and make himself a legend, since he had a worse experience about typical paternity, so everytime he ask his son to name of a legend and wait for his name

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Written on June 27, 2023

Submitted by meheditosher on July 06, 2023

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